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 A/N: Hey guys~! This is my first reader insert story. This was originally going to be JeffXReader but there are too many stories for Jeff already. Eyeless Jack is my favorite and he needs more love~! I was listening to this Vocaloid song called Yandelenka (also known as Yanderenka) and it gave me this idea >u> I’m supposed to be doing my History project, yet here I am. I’m too lazy to do that project right now x.x Anyways, here and hope you enjoy. Jack is going to have blue eyes here because I say so…but he is still going to be wearing that mask. He is just a normal teenager....for now.....

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Jack’s (POV)

(Y/n) was walking beside me cheerfully as we walked to school. She’s more cheerful than usual today, I wonder why? Curiosity was killing me on the inside so I decided to just ask her.
“ You sure are very cheerful today (Y/n).What happened? Did you get a rainbow unicorn that magically makes Nutella?” I chuckled.

She gave a soft giggle and turned her face sideways a little bit to face me while still walking.

“I wish I had that unicorn, but no. That’s not why I am very cheerful today. It’s because of something else…” She lowered her head a little bit, her (h/c) hair barely hiding the small blush on her cheeks. Why is she blushing? The only reason I can come up with is…. No. I mustn’t think of that. I want to at least still be able to have a chance with her.

“Come on, (Y/n). Tell me. You know you can trust me.” I told her. I just wanted to know that my assumptions were wrong so that I could be at peace for now.

She sighed. “I know, Jack…. Well, I might as well tell you since you are my best guy-friend.” She raised her head and gave me one of those cute little smiles of hers. Wait. Did she just say I am her ‘best guy-friend’? Doesn’t she see me as something more than a friend…? I felt a tugging pain in my heart, but I tried not to show it.

“I… I think I like Jeremy… (F/n) told me that the way I acted around him was different from how I acted around all the other guys. After she made me take this quiz thingy to see if I really liked him as something more than a friend…it turned out to be 90% positive. I know that I shouldn’t be happy about it just yet since I know there are possibilities that he doesn’t like me back, but I’m still happy that I finally found someone that I like.” (y/n) said while almost her whole face turned into a crimson color.

    She likes Jeremy? Her guy-friend that she barely hangs out with? (Y/n) treats him differently than me and sees him as a man and not just a friend? What does she mean it’s 90% positive that she likes him, while on the other hand, it might be a 1% possibility that she likes me?! Why does Jeremy have to be her first love and not me?!

    A million questions started to fill my head and I could feel my heart burning in pain and anger filling my actions. I tried to hide it but I just couldn’t, so I decided to just mouth an ‘oh’ and I started walking at a faster pace leaving (y/n) behind. Jeremy will pay for this. He will regret stealing my angel’s heart before I even had my chance.

Normal POV

            You just stood there, confused at why Jack had stormed off all of a sudden. When you had told him why you were more cheerful than usual, you saw some anger and pain in his ocean-blue eyes. Was he mad at you because you didn’t tell him first? You decided to shrug it off, but you still wondered why he had suddenly stormed off at such a fast pace. You took your (f/c) phone out of your pocket so that you could listen to some music. As soon as you turned on and looked at the screen of your phone, you realized you only had 5 minutes left to get to class without being late. You slid your phone back into your pocket and started to run so that you wouldn’t be late to school. Maybe Jack had noticed you and him were going to be late, so that’s why he quickened his pace? Yeah, that must’ve been it. After all, he doesn’t like to be late for things.

Your (POV)

I started to run as fast as I could hoping to catch up with Jack , but didn’t see him while I was running. I think he might’ve already gotten to school.... I finally reached the school and was just in time to see Jack enter our classroom. As I was about to enter the classroom, Jeremy walked up to me and I couldn’t help but blush now that I knew that I liked him.

“Hehe. Seems you are running late, (y/n). Here is the pencil you let me borrow yesterday. I got to get to class now, but I’ll see you later at lunch. Bye!” Jeremy handed me my pencil and then he walked quickly to his classroom.

I was blushing and wanted to go cool my face off, but I had to get inside the class so that I wouldn’t get in trouble with (The name of the teacher you hate). Gosh how I hate that teacher. I hesitantly walked into the classroom and sat down on my seat that was next to Jack’s. He was looking towards the classroom door and was completely avoiding me and the fact I was sitting next to him. Is he really that mad that I hadn’t told him first about the whole ‘me liking Jeremy’ situation? I sighed and just decided to stare out the window to clear my mind off while the teacher took attendance. I know Jack’s anger isn't going to last more than a day, it never lasts more than a day. Still, I couldn’t shrug off the feeling that something would go wrong, and it would include Jack in it mainly….

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Here is the song I was hearing(the story won't be exactly like the song but...you get the idea :)www.youtube.com/watch?v=J-t-wm…
Okay yeah my first reader insert..... I've made stories before but this is the first reader insert ever...tell me what you think please :3
Oh yeah Here are the ages~!
You and your friend: 16
Jack & Jeremy: 17
Next chapter:riko-naitou.deviantart.com/art…
I used my OC's name because I simply couldn't think of a guy's name other than Jeff and Jack XD
I don't own Jack
I own Jeremy
You own to yourself only for right now :iconheplz:
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SympathyfortheDevil9 Feb 14, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What the heck is OC?! I'm seeing it everywhere!
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Riko-Naitou Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OC stands for Original Character :)
don't worry I was like that too at first when I saw the word OC xD
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SympathyfortheDevil9 Feb 15, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks!^^
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BlackRainboww0224 Jan 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:D :D
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Xyla-tomatoes-14 Dec 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice~
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ArithiaBlueMoons Dec 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Okay. Eyeless Jack is your favorite CreepyPasta, You listen to Vocaloid, and you are writing this. You are fucking awesome!
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CreepyPastaIsMyLife2 Dec 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I already lurv it and i agree Eyeless Jack needs sum moar reader luv :D Keep up da good work tho. ^-^
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creepygirl1 Nov 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Pretty good,keep it up :-) 
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Riko-Naitou Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks ^-^
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kat1088 Oct 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I love how you political the whole point of the song in the story haha I just love it hehe this is now my favorite story because you made it like one of my favorite songs yay :D
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